The Monster

The arching spine of the creature curled toward the setting sun, its neck grew, and its bulbous eyes reached out to the dying light. Her palms were soaked. The rough edges of the walkie-talkie made it just possible enough to hold it, and push that button, that button, that button, that button, that button. That face, its face, reached into her mind and grasped at what it could, what remained. The comfortable nature of her existence finally pulled apart and revealed for what it is, was. Parsimony: an uncharitable soul that gave all it could to nothing and no-one, but everything and everyone. Its whisper gripped her.

“You want to be normal; you yearn for a reckoning. It will never come. Silent screams. Those delicious howlings for a world that rejects you but whose indifference frustrates you.”

It was upon her. Twisting, snaking, retching and closing in, it watched her quivering cheeks with anticipation. Twelve days of its slow approach, minutes in its presence, crystallised in this immortal moment. It was there, is there. It was always there, always watching, always hungry. The questions never asked. The cloying feeling that the response of the universe was too slow, like it relented its responsibility and those around her would wait ‘til the pain was too much before reaching out and saying that they had had enough. That her behaviour was too much, or too little. That months ago, her inaction drove a knife into the heart of the time they had spent together. The wretched moment departed. Her mind was drunk with self-doubt and in that doubt the monster ceased to be, before it rose up and consumed her flesh, partook in her and her being, her mind relaxed and she was finally calm.

5 minute freewrite; comfortable

Business in London

The hustle and bustle on the station was jarring to Embrey, stifling the thought pattern of his meagre brain and inviting unusual thoughts that he often preferred to keep out. The train eventually pulled in and with it the hustle grew to a swell as the passengers alighted their carriages and those waiting on the platform, like Embrey, embarked. It was a full service, but his first-class ticket got him on a quieter and more comfortable carriage, full of personal rooms that were assigned to each rider. Embrey had chosen a single room, complete with a desk for the work that he still needed to finish today before he met with his client at London.

His suitcase was heavy with anticipation, not so with just papers, pens, and pencils. As he sat and took in the well upholstered bench and thick glass pane that afforded him a view of the outside world, he knew that little else would remain the same over the coming months. He was absorbed by the chaos on the platform that he was so recently a part of, but as the train sounded off its escape from the platform, he readied his things and set about to work, hoping to be finished by the end of the several hour journey to the capital.

5 minute freewrite; Station

Potters Union

The oven fires burned warm in the back room, a heat emanating that kept the cold from setting into Rhun’s bones. He sat in the workshop hunched over the pillar of clay, his hands wet with redness. There was a quiet chatter from amongst the others, chatter about the winter festivals and what they were having for lunch. Owain approached from behind, slapping him on the shoulder and knocking him off balance.

               “How’s it–?”

               “Oh for fuck—”

               “Going?”

               “Sake!”

               Rhun hit the now misshapen clay back into a stump of amorphous goo and spun the wheel back to speed.

               “I’m fine, fine. Thanks for asking,” responded Rhun through gritted teeth.

               “Good to hear, lad. We’ve got a union meeting after work, down the pub. You coming?” Owain sat opposite Rhun, his smock speckled with slowly drying bits of clay.

               “Aye, I was planning to, but that little slap set me back ten minutes work. You’ll need to help me hit quota, cos otherwise I’ll be in the shit, and if I’m in the shit, you’re in the shit.”

               “Ok, ok, boss! Not a problem, I’ll spin up a bowl and you can take it for your pile, but see you after work though, yeah?”

               “Yeah,” Rhun grunted, and with a nod told Owain to piss off to his own station.

5-minute Freewrite word: Pottery

I’ve decided to start including quotes on the blog from books that I’m reading, both fiction and non-fiction. I think there’s a wealth of understanding to be gained from the study of history and the study of political ideology, especially with regards to ones worldbuilding. Making things up as you go can be a hard task on its own, but no world will feel more concrete and real than one that observes real the real historical tendencies of human development. Marxism, and its analytical framework of historical materialism, is of great value to a writer that wishes to create worlds that feel grounded, even in their fantastical elements. It can help you develop an idea of where struggle comes from, why struggles occur, why the scales of power shift, and in doing so allow you to better assert a world in motion, with conflict and change at its very core. Ursula K Le Guin, though an anarchist and not a Marxist, created very compelling worlds and histories through her modelling of fictional societies within an anthropological framework, which gives an air and quality of believability in her worlds despite their fictional nature.

The study of our own world and its history can only improve ones ability to create their own worlds and their own histories.

Longings

She gazed out onto the frothy waters, the ebb and flow of the waves rocking her eyelids to a deep lull. The shell curve felt like an infinity in her hands, its cool ridges taking up the space between her fingers and the rough indentations like galaxies that her fingers were eager to explore. The cool ocean air smelt intoxicating as her feet trudged forward through the morass of seaweed.

“How long has it been?”

The voice came from behind her, his voice.

“Long enough,” she responded.

The shell slipped from her hand and buried itself into the sand.

Another step and the water reached above her ankles, tickling her shins.

“It doesn’t have to end this way.”

It does, she took another step. Now her dress was soaked through at the base, the thin fabric clinging to her thighs.

“We can just go back home, back to the children,” he sounded less composed, for the first time in their long time together.

Finally, she looked back and saw a crack on his face, the morning sun catching his gentle creases and beginnings of crow’s feet. He was worried.

5-minute Freewrite word: Shell

The Sister’s Monster

“Please stop,” the words fell out of her mouth without thought. The monster that stood before her wouldn’t listen. The beating would continue, and the blood would continue to pour, from both the victim and hunter. This didn’t need to happen, she thought as the fists fell once more into the bloodied visage of her abuser. You’ll end up in prison, or worse, she thought as the others streamed into the room at the commotion, stepping over the other’s body and through the building rubble.

               “What is he doing?” asked the woman from 3b, watching through the hole in the door with her hands at her mouth.

               The thudding continued like a slow pneumatic drill, one after another, methodical, unending. A cough broke up the monotony as the victim proved their body had not yet given up. The monster wiped the blood from his face which gave the onlookers respite from the beating, to see the monster’s humanity and what it had unleashed upon its prey. Tears streaked down his face, but his fists never stopped.

               “Please, you don’t have to do this for me,” she repeated, this time with intent, with feeling. He shuddered at the words but continued.

               When the face no longer looked like a face, he lifted his victim by the hair and dragged him along the floor toward the window. Bottles of beer, needles, wrappers from take-out burgers, discarded shoes, old musty clothes, all parted way as their owner was hauled to atonement. The window opened wide, swinging outwards from a hinge on its top.

               “You can’t do that!” shouted another, the man from 3e, stepping toward the fray. A knife flashed by the monster stopped him in his tracks, the blade already stained with sticky crimson.

               Effort was required to lift his victim above the windowsill; the knife still in hand it pressed into his quarry’s skin and blood trickled down afresh over their soaked red graphic-tee.

               “I don’t want this,” she cried this time. “Please, Andrew, stop!”

               The monster turned to face his sister as his victim teetered on the precipice of the third-floor window.

“He deserves it.”

               Screams echoed upward from the ground floor as the body smashed into the pavement with a thump, bones cracking and limbs flailing helplessly. Sirens from the police vans finally arriving swelled into earshot, and along with the screeching of their tires the dreadful quiet was finally released into a cacophony of shouting, swearing and cries. The monster watched the chaos outside, staring out the window with knife in hand. His sister stood stock still, and no other dared approach him. 3c pulled at her arm, telling her to get away from him. 3d shielded 3b from the scene, embracing her. 3e watched in dread, expecting the monster to jump from the window himself or otherwise kill everyone in the room.

               Neither of those things happened. The police came. The monster became a man again and gave up his malice, escorted in handcuffs from the foundation of his interminable rage.

               “I’ll always protect you,” he whispered as he passed her, a soundless mouthing of words only she could intimate from her preternatural sibling connection. It rang over and over in her head, louder and louder until the moment her head finally hit the pillow of her hospital bed.

Writing is hard. End.

Finished the first draft of Bronwen’s story, or at least the first act of her story. Clocked in at around 40,000 words so a little under a full length novel but longer than a novella. I’ve written about 8000 words developing a side character, Starling, who’s likely to have his own story (short or long, haven’t decided).

I’ve also returned to the first draft of The Shadows Over Fandelran, now just Warren: Reawakening (until I sour on that name too). I’ve been taking notes on a printed copy for a year every now and then, dipping in and out, but now I’ve begun a proper rewrite with all I know about the story and the world since writing Bronwen’s first act. It could almost be a retelling at this point, but who knows how it’s going to end up.

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An Unexpected Discovery

Traversing twisting caverns that never ended and whose beginnings were lost to time, that was Lynne’s passion, her calling. As she stepped down through what seemed to be an arch, crumbled away to simply two pillars of stone, the cavern opened up into a vast expanse. Her torchlight didn’t illuminate much besides the ten feet in front of her, but she had an inkling, a feeling you get after spending so much of your life in caves, that the ceiling had exploded upwards and the space ahead of her would go on for quite some time. She’d been exploring for four hours already, and at this point it would have been best to either set up camp or head back up to the surface. But it called her forwards, that great expanse, and the well-worn path that signalled an old civilisation perhaps once thrived here. It could have been an old Dwarven city, maybe, but she was unsure of any that had existed in this area.

     The path winded downwards, spiralling down the side of what felt like a cliff. Torchlight glinted off of nothingness away from its edge, just reflecting off of dust that she had thrown up as rock crumbled underfoot. Back and forth it twisted on itself, and eventually she was almost travelling straight down the cliff face. Carefully placed feet became carefully placed hands as she began clambering down the steps like a ladder, her torch held in her teeth. Her feet came in contact with a flat surface, and with a passing of her torch she seemed to be at the cliff’s base. She shone the torchlight back out ahead of her once more, away from the cliff face, and once again, nothingness, dust.

     Smoothed out edges that signalled a continuation of the path from above slithered out towards the centre of the chamber, and she followed them. She had no idea how far the cave extended to her left and right, but at this point the ceiling overhead must have been hundreds of feet away. It was warm here at this depth, almost uncomfortably so. Was she already so close to the upper mantle? She checked her altimeter, one made specially for spelunking. Negative 30,000 metres.

     “This must be broken,” she hit the side of the altimeter, hoping the reading would change. The dial swung wildly in either direction before finally settling down once again around negative 30,000. “When did I get so low down?”

     Lynne shrugged, she knew the way back up was relatively straight forward from here, with few twists and turns to account for. The entrance was a tiny slit in the ground hidden in an overgrown forest and was about the hardest thing to navigate on the entire journey. It would be easy enough to get back whenever she needed to, she convinced herself.

     Continuing to the centre of the chamber, she made sure to place the occasional marker to ensure that she could make it back to the cliff face, and made notes on her map to keep track of her relative location on the surface. About now she would probably be coming under a large river; potentially a number of aquifers fed the chamber in the past, a must for the cave dwellers of old.

     One misplaced step was all it took. Her head buried in her surveying kit. She felt her ankle twist below her and the ground swallow her entirely, slipping down a smooth, chamfered edge. She dropped her map, and her torch, watching helplessly as the light tumbled into the unending maw of the abyss. Still falling, albeit rather slowly, she tried to find purchase on the surface she was tumbling down, but it refused her with its smoothness. With a lame ankle and no light, she could do little else but ensure that she was prepared for her landing. It got hotter; warm balmy air being spewed up from the hole, as though this was a portal directly to the planet’s magma table. The lack of red and orange light assuaged some fears that she might fall directly into a river of lava, but it was little comfort. She wrestled her altimeter off of her waistband: negative 35,000 metres and counting. Finally, her torchlight came into view, and she braced herself for impact with the ground. She slid like a curling puck on the now level surface, still smooth as the hole’s edges, and eventually came to a stop as the ground turned to gravel. She clambered to her feet and hobbled over to the torch, shining it around the hole’s base. A cave entrance emerged at the edge of the gravel.

     With little else she could do, she located the remnants of her surveying kit, the map still in one piece, as opposed to the shattered remains of her compass. She made an educated guess on the amount of lateral movement she had been subjected to by the hole and made a note on the map of her assumption. The cave’s mouth called to her, and she answered, committed to explore what was most-likely going to be her final resting place. Such was the life of a spelunker.

     As she followed the caves smooth edges, she began to see light. But not of magma, or of lava; something altogether unnatural. Out of place. More light, and slowly the cave became bathed in a pale colour, akin to the shining of a full moon.

     Her jaw slackened and heart raced as the cave finally opened up. Great towering buildings speckled the horizon; above was a fantastic glass ceiling where the source of the moonlight shone. Some looming artificial light bulb, a manufactured sun for the underground city. Stood dumbfounded looking over the metropolis from above, she noticed its citizens going about their business, manoeuvring throughout the sprawling streets and road system, the sounds of the hustle and bustle of their lives just barely reaching her ears. They looked almost human, but that couldn’t be right. No humanoid could live so deep below the surface. A thriving population that had gone unrecorded, unknown to the world above.

     Ignoring the pain of her ankle, she rushed down a set of steps that led out away from her trap hole, towards the city. She eventually reached its outskirts, and there they were. Humans. Odd bluish skin, but humans, nonetheless. They had all the right morphology: no pointed ears like elves; taller than dwarves; no horns; no feathers. By now she was generating stares and glances from the city folk as she began meandering through its streets and alleyways. They spoke a language she couldn’t understand, nothing like she’d ever heard before.

     A pull on her arm stopped her in her tracks. One of them had grabbed her, plucked her from the road before a motorised vehicle sped past.

     “Thank you,” she replied by instinct.

     The cave-human frowned in response, then uttered something in their language before releasing her, and getting on with their own business.

     “I’m going to be famous. I’m going to go down in the annals of history! A completely undiscovered, unknown race of humans that live deep underground. This will change the very understanding of our civilisation, of the surface world!” She drew even more stares and odd looks as she ranted to herself in bemusement.

     Then, her head was covered in what felt like a sack, her knees were kicked out from under her, and her arms were wrenched behind her back. A rope pushed the sack into her mouth as the first of her screams began to leave her mouth. Handcuffs locked her wrists together and she was stood back up. Through the relatively loose weave of the sack, she could still see the streetlamps and their cool lunar light. She was pushed into the back of a car, and she felt a horrible knot of dread twist itself in the pit of her stomach as the engine roared into action. There may have been a reason why they had never been discovered.


A response to the writing prompt on reddit here: https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/10a38jc/wp_youre_an_urban_explorer_you_spend_your_days/

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Death by Dragon Fire

Crowds jeered as the executioner locked Bronwen into the stocks, its wood cheap and splintered. She winced as the frayed edges rubbed against her wrists and fragments of the wood fur caught and buried themselves into her skin. She craned her neck upwards, looking out to the crowd to see the faceless mass calling for her death. She had been caught in the act of piracy, having set tens of the kingdom’s ships ablaze in the past month. Finally, they had her, the arsonist of the seas.

     She was found amongst the remains of a great merchant galley, having been knocked unconscious by the impact of a cannonball. It had been fired by another royal vessel, against their own allies, to ensure her capture. Her ribs were broken, and her left leg had been left lame from being caught directly by the ball of iron, but the people wanted to see her burnt for her crimes. Death by dragon fire, her final sentence. A fitting end for a firebrand mage.

     Now, at the edge of the world, on a cliff that overlooked the great oceans, she awaited her fate. The sea brought with it a bone-chilling cold, and she couldn’t help but fidget in the stocks, leading to ever more splinters finding their way into her arms. There was no point in fearing the end, she thought to herself. This life was only hers due to a failure to end it once before. Forced to cling on to what little she had by another, to protect her kind, and master her power. For their sake, not hers.

     “It is time!” a cloaked man stood at the front of the stage, commanding the audience with great fervour. “As Torak’shitar comes, the accused will beg for mercy, for forgiveness for her transgressions! I ask you all to follow the guard back down the cliff, so that she may be bathed in the righteous fires of the dragons.”

     The crowds did as they were told, shuffling down and away from Bronwen, leaving her alone at the top of the hill. Her hair billowed in her face, and the salt spray from the sea showered her in ambivalence. Only the wind’s howling and the crashing of the waves accompanied her now.

     At last, the dragon’s cry echoed out from on high, from the mountains to the east. Torak’shitar, or so the crier said. She’d never heard of them before, despite being well versed in the dragons that existed within the area. After all, it was a wizard’s duty to know the dwellings of the progenitors of magic, the strongest beings on the planet. On great metallic wings, the dragon swooped down from the sky, cutting through the clouds like a ship through sea foam. They hovered a few feet from Bronwen, their winds threatening to blow the stocks away with her in them, down into the jagged rocks below.

     “Fear not,” the dragon spoke to Bronwen. “I know of your mother, of your heritage.”

     She looked up and gazed upon Torak’shitar. Her wings gleamed with brilliant crimsons, and her head was bowed to Bronwen.

     The dragon approached with fine precision, stopping inches from her face. A tongue, forked and rough, licked away the hair that covered her eyes. Bronwen felt the tears roll down her cheeks, having been saved by yet another stranger, another that sought to see her fulfil her duty. She was not worthy. But Torak’shitar did not care. She lifted Bronwen from the stocks, holding the girl gently between her claws. Then, with ease, she released a glut of fire and bathed the stocks and gallows in dragon’s flames, causing a chorus of cheers and exultations from the crowds at the bottom of the hill. On Torak’shitar’s wings, Bronwen was carried to safety, and returned to her home amongst the sea.


A response to the writing prompt on reddit here: https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/1072uob/wp_youre_a_prisoner_in_a_fantasy_world_after_a/

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The Flames of Revolt, The Fires of Change

We look to the leaders of our society, to the ones we’ve placed in charge of us, for hope. To give us an idea of what we must do to be a good citizen. But how many times have they abused that trust? Strung us along and treated us like dirt, like cattle? I ask you, men, and women, and all those who stand before me today, where are our leaders now? Where do they stand as our children starve in the streets and our crops wither? I ask you; how do they expect us to last through this coming Winter?

What hope do we have if those who we have placed so much trust in have hoarded our wealth, hoarded our labour, hoarded our faith for their own means? To prop themselves up as our leaders. To protect the landowner, the slave keeper, the Lord. Our leaders stand in dereliction of their duty. The duty we entrusted them. Factories run all day and all night, but there is no heat in our homes, no food on our tables.

I say enough. Enough of our trust, enough of our good will. It’s time we take back what is ours, what has always been ours, what we gave them, and what they’ve taken from us. Tonight, we march on their parliament, we march on their factories, we march on their harbours. Let it be known that we shall not be taken advantage of any longer!

— Speech recorded at the Midsummer Revolution on six-millimetre film. Speaker, Djira Aurahn. Filmed by Dewi Lloyd, on location in the capital city Neiro, Dun’orn, 3482 s.c.

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